Hi, this is Miller, from the marketing department of SeniorMatch.com.
We are looking for experienced Marketers&Bloggers. We would like to set up Senior Private Label Dating Site for you at NO COST and offer all back-end for free.
We will also pay you $30 for each paid member or $2 for each free member. If you are interested, contact me at milleraf20091@gmail.com for more details.
I don't play golf, and I would play just to be out walking around in the nice lawns and the "prime real estate" given to Golf Courses. One day I will have time to do that. I would rather sit in salt water being bait for sharks. Well maybe not, but give me a lake and a kayak and I am there.
I like the golf humor though so keep me posted when you have more.
I just saw that clip from Caddy Shack that you left on Chris's page. I am still laughing. That movie seems funnier in clips! Now I am going to be tempted to watch Caddy Shack clips for the next hour instead of getting my work done.
It is always nice meeting someone who appreciates that humor.
At least we have that going for us!
And now reading through your comments I can see...ah Ha...Caddy Shack Wars it is....I must participate.
I read your lessons Walt, great content. Much better than anything I could create. You asked for critiques. I did read all 7.
It started out with a golfing metahpor but didnt seem to keep theme throughout. I ipersonally am not sure what "inside the ropes' means. I am thinking something to do with golfing but I think of boxing.
On confirmation page the Call To Action isn't clear. The link wasn't obvious to me.
Lesson 1 was a bit long for my preference but it did flow well. I didn't get the connection between headline and first paragraph.
I would try to get a stronger hook at the bottom of the lessons so your reader is drooling in anticipation of the next lesson.
Congratulations on your endeavour. My feedback is based on my experience reading not on doing.
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Hi, this is Miller, from the marketing department of SeniorMatch.com.
We are looking for experienced Marketers&Bloggers. We would like to set up Senior Private Label Dating Site for you at NO COST and offer all back-end for free.
We will also pay you $30 for each paid member or $2 for each free member. If you are interested, contact me at milleraf20091@gmail.com for more details.
Regards,
Miller
http://af.SeniorMatch.com
that last course where you have to drop down lots is a bugger cant beat tiger on that one
I like the golf humor though so keep me posted when you have more.
It is always nice meeting someone who appreciates that humor.
At least we have that going for us!
And now reading through your comments I can see...ah Ha...Caddy Shack Wars it is....I must participate.
It started out with a golfing metahpor but didnt seem to keep theme throughout. I ipersonally am not sure what "inside the ropes' means. I am thinking something to do with golfing but I think of boxing.
On confirmation page the Call To Action isn't clear. The link wasn't obvious to me.
Lesson 1 was a bit long for my preference but it did flow well. I didn't get the connection between headline and first paragraph.
I would try to get a stronger hook at the bottom of the lessons so your reader is drooling in anticipation of the next lesson.
Congratulations on your endeavour. My feedback is based on my experience reading not on doing.
Good job Walt.
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